Silver Shoon - penultimate draft

When I read this story, something in it just engaged my interest. I decided to see how it might look as a short graphic piece, and started drawing it. I gave the first page to my daughter as a birthday present, then the second page as a Christmas gift, and so on.

She turned 21 this year, and I decided to put the whole thing together, Otherwise, it could have been another 10 years before it got finished.

This is the tentative final draft, but if anyone has any feedback to offer I would welcome it before I present the finished version.